Nice work - I'd turn on the lights in these building and the car's headlights. Having the cabin light inside the car on (since the door is open) would have brought this one home. Add some specular highlights on the cars - a bit more contrast between the foreground and fore would make this pop. Other than that, great work!
Such a thrilling scene! I got really impressed! First I thought it was just about people running from some weird gas-related monster... then I clicked it. I really liked the fact someone is waiting for the running guy (or maybe it's just some random citizen helping). It may be totally random and the real idea was just having both of them trying to escape, but it gives me the feeling the running guy has/knows some way to destroy the thing... and the thing knows it. I would even bet that before seeing again... before knowing the running guy has an animal inside his bag and he may be just saving it. Anyway... I love how film-like this piece ended. Gorgeous job! Congrats!